What I suggest that some more refining is…

What I suggest that some more refining is required to the page in Hindi. Also as I compared it to other pages like in French, I inferred that there are some useful data that I can add to it which will help the Indian user’s to relate them more with their day to day life as it will be in their mother tongue. What I see that except the salutation on the page,everything is in English. This is every much unlike the pages in other languages which I compared the page with.